Showing posts with label spousal abuse. Show all posts
Showing posts with label spousal abuse. Show all posts

Sunday, December 4, 2022

The Sweater (short story) by Leanne Dyck

The holidays bring unmanageable stress to some people's lives. This short story is for them--it's about spousal abuse. 

by David Hughes

In a glass-walled boardroom, businessmen in suits and ties sit around a rectangular table. Garrett Smit stands in front of these men feeling like a sheep among lions. Sweat pours from his forehead into his eyes. On the floor beside him, an easel holds a chart.

"You can." His voice quivers. He coughs, takes a sip of water, and tries again. "You can clearly see by this..." He sweeps his hand back--too far. "Ch--." The chart falls from the easel to the fl--. Garrett catches the chart but--.

The clients he had hoped to--; he needed to impress push back their chairs.

"Please," Garrett begs, "you need to--."

The clients make a beeline for the door. Garrett is called into his boss' office.

***

In an immaculate kitchen, two friends sip coffee in a quiet suburban neighborhood. As Bev Smit chats with her friend Mary, she weaves in yarn ends on the man's sweater she has just finished knitting. The cuff on her shirt rides up revealing a purple bruise.

"More bruises, Bev?"

"I'm a klutz." The same excuse she always uses.

"You're not his punching bag." Mary leaves the table. "Never again!" She heads down the hall to the bedroom. 

Bev is in hot pursuit.

Mary slides open the glass doors and finds a suitcase in the back of the closet. She puts it on the bed, opens the drawers, and starts to pack.

"Mary, I can't." Bev notices the time on the alarm clock--5:40 PM. "I need to start supper." She grabs the clothes out of Mary's hands, stuffs them back into the bureau, and rushes down the hall to the kitchen."

"What are you going to make? I'll help."

"No, Mary, you need to go. Garrett will be upset if he finds you here."

"Come with me."

"I can't."

On the way to the door, Mary hugs her friend. "Call if you need anything--night or day."

Alone, Bev goes to the fridge and fills her hands with vegetables. She peels and chops.

As she works, she glances out the window. Headlights pierce the night.

She rushes to the freezer, grabs two pork chops, and puts them in the microwave to defrost.

She's taking the pork chops out of the microwave when the front door flies open. She runs to greet him. "Hi, honey. How was your day?"

"Peachy. Just peachy." He spies the extra coffee mug on the table. "Who. Was. Here?"

She grabs the offending mug--"Mary. Only Mary."--and deposits it in the sink.

"How many times do I have to tell you? No visitors!" He roars.

"Yes, I know. I'm sorry. She dropped by and I didn't want--."

"You're sorry. You're always sorry."

"Please, please, don't be mad. I have... I have something for you." She rushes into the bedroom, grabs the sweater, and rushes out.

"Wow," he mocks, "a sweater."

"I know it's not much...just a sweater, but... I made it for you. Please try it on."

"All right, all right. Oh, my God, woman." In the bedroom, in front of the full-length mirror, he pushes his head into the neck, hands into the sleeves, and pulls it down over his body. He stands admiring himself. And then he sees the suitcase.

Bev tries to explain, apologize, beg, but Garrett isn't prepared to listen. His anger boils over. He coils his fingers into fists and...

***

Bev brings her knitting to the guild meeting and when the president asks, "Is there any new business?", Bev, in a voice no louder than a whisper, shares her truth. 

All present--Mary and the rest--listen carefully and when she is done a plan is formulated.

***

After work, Garrett heads to his favourite watering hole--a dive where drinkers go to drink. He heads to his dark corner. "Labatt's Wildcat," he tells the waitress, "and keep them coming."

Beer after beer, he becomes so loaded that he doesn't notice her through the fog until she sits down. Pretty, he judges and thinks it's his lucky day. "What'll you have? My treat."

"What kinds of coolers do you have?" She asks the waitress.

"Peach, raspberry, strawberry, and--."

She orders a strawberry cooler. When it's delivered to the table, she takes a sip and pulls her knitting needles out of her purse. He thinks that's odd but whatever. She's still pretty.

The next time he looks over she's flipping through a magazine. She must find what she's looking for because she presses the page open with the palm of her hand. Sliding the magazine across the vinyl tablecloth, she breathes in his ear. "Like it?"

He speaks to her cleavage. "I don't know. I guess."

"It's what your wife should knit, but she's too busy knitting for you."

He shifts his focus from her breasts to the magazine. "What?"

"Don't you think it would look nice on her? Suit her figure."

"How do you know what my wife looks like?"

She takes another sip of her drink. "Oh, we know a lot of things."

He drains the old and starts the new.

"We know how your wife got all those bruises."

He puts both hands palms down on the table, leans forward, and glares at her. "Leave me the--."

She swings her needle up in an arch and down. The metal tip slides into his hand, between the bones. "I said we know and if you don't stop, you'll see us again. And you don't want to see us again because the next time won't be so pleasant."


by M L Swanburg

December on this blog...

I'm filling the month with stories and also a book review.


Sunday, December 11
by Marcello Di Cintio
Who drives Canada's taxis?

Sunday, December 18
Blankie (short story)
a holiday-themed story about a senior citizen celebrating the season in a retirement home.

Each year I celebrate Christmas Eve by sharing a story...
Saturday, December 24
The Calling (short story)
a downpour becomes magical for one teenage girl when... 

Sunday, September 20, 2015

He Makes Me Feel (poem) by Leanne Dyck

This was one of my first attempts (as an adult) at writing poetry. It's a first-line repeat poem. I just learned the term for this type of poem is anaphora. The poem is about an abusive relationship.


photo by Leanne Dyck

He Makes Me Feel

Oh, the way he makes me feel
He makes me feel happy when I'm blue

Oh, the way he makes me feel
He buys me pretty things and tells me he loves me

Oh, the way he makes me feel
He takes me out to eat and we dance

Oh, the way he makes me feel
I see the way he looks at her
know
he 
wants
to...

Oh, the way he makes me feel
I come back from the bathroom
He's holding her in his eyes
He's touching her

Oh, the way he makes me feel
I can't be here anymore
I have to leave

Oh, the way he makes me feel
He finally comes home
drunk
smelling of her

Oh, the way he makes me feel
I tell him that it can't be this way
It's either her or
her or
her or
me

Oh, the way he makes me feel
He hits the wall
the bureau
me
His fist into my belly
My navel up into my chest

Oh, the way he makes me feel
The next day, I can tell he's sorry for what he's done

Oh, the way he makes me feel
It's my fault
I pushed him over the edge
It's all my fault

Oh, the way he makes me feel
He makes me feel happy when I'm blue

Oh, the way he makes me feel
He buys me pretty things and tells me he loves me

photo by Leanne Dyck





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